then she tells you to write a poem using all three pieces. what?
finally:
lights fall down a darkening sky
(before they turn again).
carnival spires spin through the dusk—
as you walk the line.
from beneath a curtain of frailty,
marble eyes fight ferris wheels
for clearer visions of you.
you tilt--
falling down from concrete heights,
unwound.
marble softens to shrouded lies,
an opaque doorway in the night.
the process was painful. the poem? questionable.
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